This book turned out a bit different from what I first planned. The end of it sort of grew into something a lot more mental than I thought I would want to write. I had fun with it though, and it certainly served to answer lots of questions.
Where do I plan on going from here?
As I’ve mentioned in a few places, the purpose of these first books is world building. Partly for myself, partly for other people.
Bob, from this point on, believe it or not, will not have a huge advantage over others. There are forces at work that aren’t going to let Bob be a demigod to humanity. More about that in the beginning of the next book 🙂
I’d really like people’s opinions about what they liked and what they didn’t.
Chapters that you would prefer I simply burn and rewrite, or simply burn?
I will say that I’m planning on pulling Bill and Kirk in for the next book. Several people commented that they were enjoyable characters, and I’m going to need to start somewhere 🙂