Well, I hope you folks have had as much pleasure reading Book 2 as I have writing it.
There won’t be anything new being written for at least a few days, as I go splurge on Legion of Nothing, and start playing around with edits, and really getting Symbiote lore straightened out (and visit relatives for Xmas).
So if you happen to see something continuity-wise that I’ve twisted up into knots, I’d greatly appreciate it if you would let me know. ((I will tag each chapter as complete if I think I’m done with it))
Just in case any of you Aussies are afraid I’m going to try to pretend to know Australia well enough to actually write a story based down there, don’t worry about it, most things are still going to be based in the States – I won’t embarrass myself by trying to write what I certainly don’t know, though I might have already stepped into it a bit.
Completed Status Report – doesn’t mean I won’t change it, just that I think I caught most of the ugliest problems:
Chapter 1.1 – lots of tense errors fixed. I’m trying to align everything into past tense narration. A few issues with descriptions of symbiotes fixed to bring them in line with where I want them to be after I’ve spent a couple months writing about them.
Chapter 1.2 – So many tense errors. Thank you all for being so patient with me, I know they must have irritated at least some of you to a great degree. Quite a few grammar mix-ups as well, found some of my “favorite” words that I used too much, and a couple bits of rewriting to bring symbiote lore into line. I know I get better with tenses later but the first two chapters were terrible, and I know the next several will be bad too.
Chapter 1.3-1.4 – even more tense errors. I hope I get past the chapters where I was having so much difficulty with tense soon, lol.